rvyn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[penises]

why not...

you get points for managing to hold my attention for the entire animation's duration.

telbanham responds:

That is exactly what I wanted to achieve from the first installment of Jimmo.
Thats 3 good and 3 bad reviews.
And an average score.
I'm pretty chuffed for my first production
Thanks

[o fortuna]

very nice

yes, i thought the beginning was really slow. I understand that section was supposed to create dramatic tension, but when everything is consistently moving at slow motion, you kinda lose the feeling of suspense as opposed to "hmm, he's picking up his cigarette... he's still picking up a cigarette..." you could have shown the stuff happening to the guy on the ground moving in slow motion as if to show things in his mind blurring to a crawl, but keeping the standing guy's actions at normal speed to convey his feeling of security and victory.

That being said, any doubt i had on the movie (the relatively simple plot was part of it), it was all blown away by the climax, which was so absolutely perfectly timed to the music I was really impressed. All the rotating shots especially were very well done, which surprised me a lot. Obviously you know how to create fast scenes, so I guess I hoped the beginning was just as visually extravagant even if it needed to be slow-paced.

I'm really a lot more impressed than I let on, I just wanted to offer constructive criticism. By the way, I noticed the Cube-style clothing of the guys ;).

HeRetiK responds:

Thanks, I'm always glad to get constructive criticism! I know, the beginning is very slow, but thats just because I wanted it to match with the music, and I think I succeeded! The rotations took me very long, thanks! The plot... well... *caugh* take it as a metaphor...

[-=Stick Wars Episode I=-]

um

pretty simplistic, more like. and i have a problem with how anakin has more of a british accent than obiwan did. otherwise, nothing's original.

Rob-D responds:

You should try to appreciate the fact that none of the characters were british. Yup, I'm just a texan trying my best to play the voices of 10 characters.
You should also appreciate that I took the time to respond to this review, I hardly ever do that. I must be bored.

[Sperm's Story]

hahahahaha

that was great. and the last reviewer was right, the file size is awesome. only complaint: it's spelled "ovaries" not "overies".

Metal-Man responds:

spelling....oh well

[thistler - ROBOTECH]

shizzle

as an animation by itself, quite good. i am wondering why it has the name robotech however. i know, you said there were no veritechs, i was just wondering what made this prompt into a robotech animation.

thistler responds:

well.. i needed an idea for the robotech comp.. and i didnt want to ripp off robotech like everyone else. so i made a different style, different chracters.. different enemies.. i actually had the thought of changing the name when i remake this episode. the reason theres no veratechs is becasue they'll come into the series next episode

[Ytown Public 4]

i guess...

you have the graphical knacks, but if you don't mind my saying so i think you may need to hire someone else to write the jokes. honestly, that "stupid joke book" would probably need to show up more than just once... and while the acting has gotten better, the sound quality really hasn't...

McRhyme responds:

The sound quality has improved some. It has, but it still isn't perfect, far from really. The jokes are not all funny. I know that. The book joke was a failiure. I added the book because I wanted the have another VIEWER'S VOICE, but I gave up and submitted. I'm thinking of deleting that part.