rvyn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A tradegy]

eh

yes, it's supposed to look messed up, mission accomplished. now i'm going to rate it a 3, and my mission is accomplished as well.

YSC responds:

E-mail me and tell me what to do...i'm sorry.. i'm just trying a new style..

[Allen and Olly]

okay..

alright. i'll say keep it up, i'm not gonna bash someone just cause they're new. however, there's no way that movie should have been 390 kb... i don't see any place where such a large file size for such a small and simple movie could come from.

Arcanum responds:

Thanks for your support. I have no idea why the movie is 390 kb since I have no sound. Soon I'm hoping to make a flash movie with my character Allen that actually makes sense. lol

[The Wrench Who Stole XMAS]

how cute

i suggest developing the wrench's stealing of christmas more, maybe show why he hated christmas. but still good, it's nice to see non-violent non-sexual stuff on newgrounds.

Dolemite50 responds:

Thanks alot for the reviews. I agree with the development of the story a little better. Look for that in the soon to be released Wrench who Stole XMAS II! This one is very heart-wrenching if I may be so bolt.

[The Fast and The Curious]

actually not that bad

nice and simple, and surprisingly i found some parts funny. a suggestion: when you rewind, rewind to the part where you choose the mission, not to the very beginning. that way people can go straight to the other missions they haven't seen yet.

hussein3 responds:

thanks. im cold and tired. but im sitting here waiting for reviews. so if anyone wants to review! dont hesitate!!!

[Flash 1-2-3's, Volume 2]

good sound tip

the tips about the sounds are helpful, but the other instructions i think won't help too much. first of all, the flash help file already teaches how to do these. second of all, without a guiding hand or screenshots, i think it's just more confusing. thirdly, i think people out there should just fiddle around with flash to learn it :). I think you should continue making tips, but not really teaching.

Oberon9580 responds:

True, there is a help file inside Flash, but after seeing the number of horrendous flash movies I see here every day, 95% of the people probably don't read them anyways.

Secondly, I decided when making these movies that I would try to make them as small as reasonably possible so users could open them up in just a few seconds rather than a minute, so the screenshots had to go. :(

People SHOULD fiddle around with Flash to learn it, true... I'm just offering a little advice to help speed them along.

[No More 2]

better than before

some parts were nicely animated, but mostly they were pretty static and non dynamic. you've done a much better job synchronizing sound, though, which I found to enhance things a lot (IF you did).

MysticSonGohan responds:

Ha, I think you mean my parts, Jon and Mike we're new to drawing with a mouse.

[POkEyMON!!!1]

Wow.

The entire audio clip and basis for this animation was ripped off of a Simpsons episode. Good job you copying moron.

nosh37 responds:

Wow, you are a quick little man, you know where i got the clip at. Kudos to you my man.










Your gay.

[US vs Terrorists]

yeah... no.

hell in a handbasket i tell you... and you play counterstrike, you should know what sounds go with what guns, moron. You used AUG sounds for pistol, and shotgun sounds for what looks like a submachine gun.

Basically, I'd find the stupidity of the premise to be offensive if I wasn't so disgusted by the lack of effort here to begin with.

ChannelCat responds:

You have some Fu**ing Problems you know that? I made this movie quick, and second, I AM NOT TRYING TO MODEL IT AFTER A GAME!!!!!!! I WAS OUT OF SOUNDS AND DECIDED TO USE COUNTERSTRIKE!!!! - Jesus Christ guy

[=PARANOID=]

Great atmosphere

I love the look of the entire thing, and really, that voice acting is hilarious. I gotta ask though, seriously, does anyone else think the whole violence thing isn't that funny anymore? It's getting close to being quite excessive.

smokeshow responds:

hehe thanks for the review!

And no... violence is always funny.... even though this flash isn't based on violence :)

[boy]

Meh

It better have taken a long time to do the graphics (which look fabulous), because honestly the animation is quite simple and rough, and once the graphics are done already, would not have taken long to do. I expected something longer...

thistler responds:

well, to tell the truth, the graphics took me about 2 minutes to draw. it was like my second try at flash and at the time i didnt realise what potential flash had for story telling. im making up for all my past animations with my next cartoon though (due in about a month)- (check the ALPHAS soon)