rvyn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Operation: Chop Stick]

impressive

one of the closest things to match the glory of xiaoxiao, but still a little lax when it comes to scope and fluiditiy (i think xiao uses a higher frame rate). but at least you know how things move, not like other xiaoxiao copiers.

[Resident Evil Flash Intro]

okay, here's my thought

there's definitely potential here, and the narration is much better than the stuff normally on NG. art is so-so, but i think you can improve a lot. anyway, my real problem is the file size. this is like a 1-minute long movie, and it's 1.7 megabytes large. you need to lower audio compression, especially for the music, which is low and simple anyway. i think you can lower the file size by half just by doing that.

[A U R O R A: episode 3]

hahaha

sorry, the graphics were good and all, but the voices and dialogue were absolutely awful! and everyone sounded exactly the same.

[why a squirrel shouldn't]

baHA

love the ending. should put more emphasis on the buildup to number 1 though, because it definitely deserves it.

[Pacman's Revenge]

to the last reviewer

...did he assume that the pacman theme was originally from bloodhound gang? uh, try the other way around, fella.

[Ytown Public 4]

i guess...

you have the graphical knacks, but if you don't mind my saying so i think you may need to hire someone else to write the jokes. honestly, that "stupid joke book" would probably need to show up more than just once... and while the acting has gotten better, the sound quality really hasn't...

McRhyme responds:

The sound quality has improved some. It has, but it still isn't perfect, far from really. The jokes are not all funny. I know that. The book joke was a failiure. I added the book because I wanted the have another VIEWER'S VOICE, but I gave up and submitted. I'm thinking of deleting that part.

[NewGrounds: After Dark]

nice song!

love the futurama remix you used.

[Darth Vulgar]

yes, the audio was funny, but...

i'd give opie and anthony the high score for the jokes, but i can only give you credit for the animation...

[Lain - A Tribute]

hah

the funny thing is this animation actually has more motion in it than the entire Lain tv series. i have a certain respect for the anime and all, but a little more than like 3 really different cells couldn't hurt, could it? Yours, on the other hand, was really well done.

[Crazy Alarm]

good, but

the file size is hideously large, and it all almost certainly came from the music you used. try to lower that, and optimize the graphics more.