okay, here's my thought
there's definitely potential here, and the narration is much better than the stuff normally on NG. art is so-so, but i think you can improve a lot. anyway, my real problem is the file size. this is like a 1-minute long movie, and it's 1.7 megabytes large. you need to lower audio compression, especially for the music, which is low and simple anyway. i think you can lower the file size by half just by doing that.