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okay, here's my thought

there's definitely potential here, and the narration is much better than the stuff normally on NG. art is so-so, but i think you can improve a lot. anyway, my real problem is the file size. this is like a 1-minute long movie, and it's 1.7 megabytes large. you need to lower audio compression, especially for the music, which is low and simple anyway. i think you can lower the file size by half just by doing that.

hahaha

sorry, the graphics were good and all, but the voices and dialogue were absolutely awful! and everyone sounded exactly the same.

baHA

love the ending. should put more emphasis on the buildup to number 1 though, because it definitely deserves it.

i guess...

you have the graphical knacks, but if you don't mind my saying so i think you may need to hire someone else to write the jokes. honestly, that "stupid joke book" would probably need to show up more than just once... and while the acting has gotten better, the sound quality really hasn't...

McRhyme responds:

The sound quality has improved some. It has, but it still isn't perfect, far from really. The jokes are not all funny. I know that. The book joke was a failiure. I added the book because I wanted the have another VIEWER'S VOICE, but I gave up and submitted. I'm thinking of deleting that part.

yes, the audio was funny, but...

i'd give opie and anthony the high score for the jokes, but i can only give you credit for the animation...

good, but

the file size is hideously large, and it all almost certainly came from the music you used. try to lower that, and optimize the graphics more.

very cool

nice and smooth animation, and i didn't think it was TOO predictable. the bit with the dog sort of didn't make any sense however.

I can only try to have people view me as I would like them to view me, and animation is a step in that direction.

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