rvyn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Squigo 2]

very cool

nice and smooth animation, and i didn't think it was TOO predictable. the bit with the dog sort of didn't make any sense however.

[A Stupid War.]

meh

i don't understand if you're trying to be funny or poignant. it's possible to be both, but in this case, i don't think you succeeded in either case. and also, the only thing that really shows that it ISN'T WW2 is that the planes are too advanced. otherwise all the images point to WW2.

[Strike Force]

the question is...

why do the modified f-14s look like mig-29s and why are the iraqi fighters American F-16s?

[ROBOTECH Episode 6]

getting better!

the use of all 3d is really making a much cooler and more consistent look for the movie. still, i find very little story development here, especially since the music provides little excitement and there is no dialogue. just a thought. oh, and your spelling's gotten much better too!

[Smokey - Jump Around]

you got what you did

the synching is indeed impressive, but unfortunately i think because of all the time you spent making the mouths move correctly you didn't bother making the animations of their bodies at all exciting. even the dj, who should be very animated (and his head should be bobbing in sync too) just sorta slides across the screen.

Smokey-Chipmunk responds:

Meh. Whatcha gunna do

[Robotech Ep. 1 - 5]

the sad thing

the sad thing about that last review was that he commented on your ongoing problems with misspelling, even though most of the things he said were misspelled as well. anyway, yeah, you really need to work on your spelling still, and altogether the animation isn't too bad... only a little slowly paced.

[Always Changing]

great effort!

anybody who gives this a low score obviously does not understand the amount of effort that needs to get a frame-by-frame animation to finish. the art may not be 100% perfect, but the animation was awesome. I myself am working on a 3-minute frame by frame flash animation for a friend's music video. that roughly translates to 2000+ handdrawn frames (expect it by the end of the month). so i definitely know the pain you went through.

[Not Reciprocal]

great graphics

the animation and graphics were great, but i really am getting tired of the style, aka the anime style. i love anime and everything, but you'd think people could go about making animations without them looking like Final Fantasy or Dragonball all the time. the story was okay, i think you could have done something less "fantasy" and created the same impact. you don't have to be banished by a girl's father to not like someone back when they kiss you.

[ROBOTECH episode 5]

i guess...

the new veritech, if you designed it, looks terrible, sorry. no offense. i think if you were going to do the traced bitmap of your 3d models, you should do it for the entire movie, not just some parts. the 3d stuff looks decent, but it isn't consistent. and also, no offense to you as a person, but good LORD use spell check even once, please!

[The Evil News]

jokes are a little tired

the jokes aren't that original, nor are they very clever. too bad, i was expecting better.